Ch. 15 (The Nearness Of You)
-Even though we had a beautiful dinner at the bistro, I candidly asked Brad if he likes my sister.
-He assured me that Naveah hit on him, and I'm the one that he wants.
-After chugging the Spline Reticulator, we shared a heated moment on the dance floor.
-He decided to be a gentleman and take me home.
-A week later, he surprised me with a romantic picnic by the beach.
-We shared conflicting views about marriage and kids.
-We ended up having an intense make-out session on the bench.
*Graphic sexual content, nudity, strong language*
Location: 99 Embarcadero Drive
Date: Friday, 7/8/2009
Time: 9:17 p.m.
Ding.
The vibration of the elevator coming back down to the the first floor reminds me that we've finally arrived at his place. The juggling sound of his keys take me away from the drumming of my own heart as he tries to open the door. Creeeek. Our eyes briefly meet before he steps inside, holding it open for me. As soon as I enter the doorway, the reality of the moment finally sets in. I'm here at his place. We know what we are about to do. The frustration of our missed encounters, the agony of his absence, the time that we have spent together, the raging jealousy I felt when he flirted with my sister, the romantic surprises and the burning curiousity of what his naked body feels like has come down to this very moment. There are a million reasons flying through my mind as to why we should slow down, but my body can't bear another minute of wondering, waiting.
Thud. The door closes. It seems to echo through the living room before our eyes find each other again, standing still in silence. His intense gaze makes me even more aware of what's going to happen. Visions of us rolling around on his bed, naked, sweaty, gasping for breath makes me look away, afraid that he'll read my lewd thoughts. Just the idea of him seeing my bare body makes me lose my breath, even slightly embarassed. This will be the night that unravels that mystery. Flashbacks of how hard he felt against my hand earlier makes me even more curious. What will it look like? What will it feel like? And the big question: how big is it? Oh my God, I am such a perv.
The next thing we know, our mouths hungrily devour each other. Waves of electric particles radiate from his lips and it travels to my whole body, from my hair follicles all the way down my toes. He pulls me even closer with such desperation that I gasp in surprise, making me arch my back. His hands squeeze my waist before they travel down my ass, cupping them possessively.
"Mmmmm...." I moan, savoring the feel of his warm mouth on my neck, making me shiver, helplessly overpowered by his masculine scent. This makes him suck on my skin even harder, his breath quickening as my body slowly writhes against his. I can't even attempt to explain this narcotic affect he has on me. His gaze, his presence, his voice, his smell, his taste, his touch...it's causing a deep need that's beyond what my body wants or what my heart longs for . It's stirring something deep inside my soul, a place that even my own mind can't grasp.
"Lyn...are you sure you want to do this?" His pale blue eyes glisten like a liquid drop of molten sky.
I nod quietly, losing my ability to speak, think or reason. The only thing on my mind is the anticipation of what's going to happen when we get to his room.
"If you don't feel comfortable, we can always stop, okay? It's your call." He gently caresses my face, making me want him even MORE. Knowing that I have the option to change my mind gives me even more freedom to pursue my heart's desires. This can change everything. I can even risk losing his interest if that's the only thing he's after. But at this point, I don't care. I'm in way too deep tonight to turn back now.
I watch him take each step, somewhat hypnotized by the gracefulness of his back. He moves so confidently, so surely, and it makes me wonder if he will be just as smooth when it comes to my body. Will he know what to do? Will he know where to go? If he has the ability to awaken the inner slut in me, I'm in big trouble.
"Gonna take you in the room suga'
Lock you up and love for days
We gonna be rockin baby
Till the cops come knockin"
"So this is my room." He whispers, as if it's going to help diffuse the cloud of tension between us.
"It's nice." I observe, pretending to ignore what we're here for. The cobalt blue color emanating from the lamps casts a cozy, intimate, yet masculine ambience in the room. It makes me want to just nestle under the covers and fall asleep in his arms. At the same time, the sight of his bed makes me wonder how many girls have been here. How many of them grinded against his naked body? How many of them called out his name and moaned in ecstasy? Just the very thought of another woman touching him makes me livid, but with his good looks and charming nature, it's hard to deny that there were probably many before me.
Eyes penetrating mine, he slowly takes a step towards me. I can feel the rise and fall of my own chest as he gently takes my face in his hands, leaning closer until our lips touch delicately, lingering, as if he's whispering secrets into my mouth. The tenderness of his kiss sets my heart on fire, fueling the overwhelming longing that I have for him.
But this moment of tenderness doesn't last long. Our growing need for each other deepens our kiss as our tongues dance wildly, probing deeply, tasting each other, hungry for more. Our hands fly everywhere, along with our clothes. They seem to be an inconvenient barrier between our skins.
Standing in front him in my pink lacy teddy makes me feel shy, yet sexy at the same time. Noone would ever guess that the jeans and t-shirt girl can wear something so provocative underneath. Since I met Brad, I had a feeling I was going to have to start wearing lingerie. It was a matter of time before he gets to see it. And I have every intention of putting it to good use.
"Damn. That's what you had on the whole time??" His jaw drops as he greedily scans my body from head to toe.
"Oh, this little thing?" I tease, sticking my ass out and sucking my pointer finger.
"Oh my God, what are you doing to me??" He pleads, a tent growing in his boxer briefs. I give him a mischievous smile, loving the affect I have on him. Oh my. That's a big tent.
"You mean this?" I run my fingers through my hair, then let them slowly travel down to my breasts.
"Holy shit, don't tease me like that." He rushes towards me in frustration.
"What are you gonna do?" I place my hand on his smooth, hard chest, preventing him from getting any closer.
"I'm gonna get you back." He groans, eyes intensely serious, as he lifts me up and throws me on the bed.
"Eeeeek!!" I giggle, loving the fact that he takes charge.
He finds my mouth again as he hovers over me, rubbing his erection on my hip. It feels rock hard, and it makes me even more nervous. For a moment I feel like a virginal school girl, doubting my abilities to handle what's to come, and try to squirm away from it. Somehow sensing my apprehension, he starts kissing my neck to help calm me down. My mind focuses on the warm, tingly sensations he's causing to my skin, and I start to relax. He reaches behind my back to unzip my teddy, gently pulling it down until it passes my legs.
Now I'm completely naked, displaying everything in front of him. I feel very exposed, unsure of what he thinks of my body. In an attempt to lessen my self-consciousness, I turn to my side.
"No, don't hide from me. You don't know how long I've waited for this." He gently presses my body down until I'm on my back again. His pale blue eyes briefly meet mine before they travel to my breasts, down to my navel and rests on the most private part of my body. I lie there anxiously, unsure of what he's going to do next.
"God, you're beautiful." He whispers, tracing the length of my whole leg with his hand from my inner thigh to the tip of my toes. Smiling, he picks up my leg and nibbles on my toes lightly, making me gasp at the tickly sensations. Then his mouth slowly follows the length of my shin before it reaches my inner thigh. Knowing how close his mouth is, I close my eyes, my heart racing at where his tongue will lead.
"Brad..." I whimper, getting lost in the delicious sensations that he's causing to my body.
"Shhh...just relax. I'm just getting started." He grumbles as his tongue moves up my inner thigh, painfully close, driving me crazy. Then his mouth travels to my hip, lightly biting it before he circles his tongue around my navel, making me hiss between my teeth. His mouth painstakingly moves towards my breasts, taking away any patience I have left. But instead of his mouth reaching my breasts, he traces my stomach with his hands, slowly moving towards my breasts until he cups them. He leans down to bathe my right nipple with his tongue, gently flicking it before lightly sucking on the other one, making me arch my back in ecstasy. Another bolt of electricity shoots all the way down my moist parts, making me ache for him even more.
"Brad...now..." I weakly protest, squeezing my thighs together.
"Not yet. I told you I was gonna get you back." He smiles mischievously as he turns me over on my stomach, with my ass sticking out in the air. He kisses my lower back while his hand moves up and down my thigh, stopping to squeeze my cheeks. He bites my shoulder before running his tongue down the length of my back again, then slows down as he rubs his face on my ass. This makes me gasp and crawl away in surprise, but he quickly pulls me back down towards him. He reaches behind me and gently strokes my swollen center while he fiercely grabs my mouth and ravishes it with his tongue, making me whimper uncontrollably.
"Oh my God, stop torturing me, damn you!!" I mumble against his lips, grinding against his hand, looking for any type of relief as he probes his tongue deeper in my mouth.
"Oh, you're really gonna get it." He threatens as he props me up on all fours before he spreads my legs and devours me from behind. I moan feverishly as his tongue skillfully explores me, using just the right amount of pressure and movement, making me even more drenched. His warm, moist mouth feels like molten silk, radiating waves of heat throughout my body, creating intense tingly sensations down to my very core. This makes me even more desperate to have him inside me, the aching need becoming unbearable.
"Please, baby, now. I can't take it anymore." I beg, almost crying, pushing myself against his tongue.
"Not until you come." He mumbles under his breath, his mouth in a frenzy between my legs. Then he focuses on the most sensitive part, controlling his tongue, building up the powerful wave of tingles inside my body.
"Oh my God, right there. Don't stop..." I gasp, on the brink of explosion.
"Mmmm...you taste so fucking good..." He whispers, holding on to my quivering thighs.
"I'm gonna...I'm gonna...I'm gonna..."
"Mmmmmmmm..."
"Bradley, I'm gonna come!!!" I scream, feeling my body explode from the inside out. Waves of heat and electricity radiate from the center of my body, traveling to my toes and face. A blinding streak of light overpowers me, sucking me in to another dimension, making me float among stars and galaxies. He holds on to me as he watches my body jerk uncontrollably, making sure I don't fall off the bed. I collapse, my face buried on the pillow as I try to catch my breath.
"Please you
Tease you
Eat you
Make you feel
So good inside
Loving you long
If that's alright?"
The feel of his lips on my back wakes me up from my delirious high. I turn around, gazing at him in awe, wondering how he knows my body so well. I've heard of women talking about body-shaking, mind-blowing orgasms but I didn't think they were real. I just thought they were exaggerations from people who like to brag about their sex like. But here I am, completely consumed by the man that just made me feel like the whole universe exploded inside my body. His eyes are glistening, looking at me like I'm some exquisite creature.
"You okay?" He smiles, making me feel unusually shy and humbled by his selfless desire to please me.
"Yeah..." I stammer, my craving for him growing again. I crawl towards him, eyes glued to his, and I reach inside his boxer briefs. His eyes widen in surprise as I gently stroke him until he's hard again. He feels big in my hand, which makes me nervous and giggle at the same time.
"What?" He murmurs under his breath, biting his lower lip.
"Nice..." I grin, amazed at how smooth he feels between my fingers.
"You're silly." He chuckles, shaking his head.
"I want it. Now." I whisper as I take his boxer briefs off, exposing his whole length. Oh my. No wonder he's popular with the ladies. I'm surprised at how assertive I am, but I feel so comfortable with him, as if we've done this a thousand times. He has this way of making me feel like the sexiest, most desirable woman in the world when he looks into my eyes.
After sliding a condom on him, I impatiently guide him between my legs. He enters me slowly, as if he's careful not to hurt me. The deeper he goes, the more he stretches me, until he's completely inside, taking over me. I close my eyes, trying to ignore the slight pain. Gosh, has it been that long?? I can't even remember the last guy I slept with. He picks up his pace a little more as I caress his arms lovingly.
The pain decreases as my body gets used to him, bringing more pleasure than I can ever imagine. He grabs my leg as he pushes faster, my moans matching the intensity of his thrusts. Fuck. It should be illegal to feel this good. I drop my head on the bed, biting my finger at how sinfully delicious he feels inside me as I grind against him furiously, intoxicated by the slippery, wet friction between our skins. The chemicals in my body are dancing with his, creating a wave of euphoric energy between us as the heat of our bodies intensify in wild abandon.
"Oh Brad, oh Brad..." I moan loudly, meeting his thrusts as beads of his sweat fall on my breasts.
"Holy shit, you feel good..." He groans deeply, lowering his face to kiss me.
"Papa gonna have to leave
A message on the telephone baby
There won't be no stoppin' me
Till the cops come knockin"
He turns me over until I'm on top of him, still rock hard. I move up and down his length slowly, savoring every inch as he squeezes my breasts. But one deep thrust from him sends my body in a frenzy, making me cry out in dizziying delight. I move urgently, impatiently, knowing he's very close to his explosion.
"Lyn...Lyn...I'm..." He mumbles, holding on to my hips.
"Come for me, Brad..." I purr as I stroke his chest.
"Ohhhhhhh....shiiiiittt!!!" He yells after a few deep thrusts, squeezing my hips, overpowered by the convulsions of his body. Watching the intense pleasure on his face is so hot, knowing I had something to do with that. I love how he reacts to me, it just makes me want to satisfy him even more, until he can't possibly want another woman. After he settles down, he opens his eyes, pulling me down to kiss me passionately, still inside me.
"Oh my God, that was..." He whispers, his arm possessively draped over me as he rests his face on my stomach.
"Mind-blowing..." I murmur, trying to catch my breath...and pulse. We lay there in silence, listening to each other breathe, watching our heartrates slow down, smelling each other's skin, feeling the intoxicating heat of our bodies mesh together. Even my own mind has surrendered its fears, at least for the moment, as I try to make sense of the unmistakable change in our relationship.
Where do we stand with each other? What's going to happen tomorrow? I'm not going to think about that right now. I just had the most amazing experience of my life, and I'm going to savor this delicious, surreal moment with the man that I am falling hopelessly in love with.
*Copyright 2011 Lyn C.S.*
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"Til The Cops Come Knockin" by Maxwell
Video by: nitsua1964
Woooowwwww. Awesome!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOH MY FUCKING GAWD!
ReplyDeleteI loveD the buildup and the actual act.
I'm in awe, you wrote this so beautifully, it will definitely go down in my books as one of the most memorable love scenes in Simstory history, and there aren't that many, trust me.
This was incredible!
P.S. I can just see Lyn getting used to her earth shattering orgasms. Brad is in trouble, he doesn't know what he's started.
HOT! sizzle! you were wrong it was hotter than you said. Good and braver than me. LOL.
ReplyDeleteHey wild thang. Thanks for warning me Lyn. That was one Hot Hot Hot chapter. But it was still very well written and I like it alot. I think just reading this chapter just about made my own ***** get an ******** lol. Can't wait to hear what happens next. keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteLOL, Traci, you crack me up!! I'm so glad you enjoyed that update, since I was really nervous about it. I didn't want to scare you away. I didn't expect it to end up so graphic but that's what the characters ended up doing. I didn't realize how much sexual chemistry they had until they were in the moment, and I was like wooow!! In fact, it changes how I see them now.
ReplyDeleteSo do you still want to slap Brad? XD
LOL Val, thank you soooo much, you have no idea how relieved I am that you enjoyed this update. As soon as I posted it, I was like "oh shit", it's out there now. What will they think? Will I scare them away? But I'd be doing disservice to the characters and the story if I left out the one of most crucial moments in their relationship.
ReplyDeleteWow, one of the most memorable in Simstory history?? OMG, what an honor, although it's hard for me to take that kind of credit considering how many amazing writers there are on the forum. Reading your scorching love scenes definitely inspired me to be more daring and honest with my own story, so I thank you for that. I think that allowed me to come out of my own shell as a writer.
Haha I definitely feel like my graphic love scene cherry just got popped, and now it's out of the way. lol I agree, Brad is in big, big trouble. He has no idea what kind of monster he just unleashed. :-)
Haha Jerry, I agree, it came out way way hotter and more graphic than I planned. But I blame the characters for that, they wouldn't let me play it safe. They wanted to show their insatiable appetite for each other. So I had to submit to their wishes. lol
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you left a comment though, it lets me know that I didn't scare you away. XD
OMG, Tom, your comment made me blush, smile and giggle at the same time. Wild thang, huh? XD I'm sorry I didn't mean to have that affect on you...but I don't blame you one bit since this update was very graphic. I hope you weren't at work when you read this. lol Aaak, who am I kidding? This was probably the equivalent of female porn. lol Yes, I definitely had to warn you since you're a guy and I didn't know how you'd respond to it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tom, I'm so glad you enjoyed it and you still found it well-written. And thanks for leaving a comment. I didn't scare you away after all. The update was probably bordering on raunchy but then again, Lyndsey and Brad have raunchy sides. I guess it was a matter of time before it came out.
Wow! great update, cant wait to see how she deals with everything when she comes back to the present.
ReplyDeleteHi Kristine, thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the update and you left a comment. I was really nervous about it, I didn't expect it to come out so graphic but that's how it turned out based on their personalities. I almost didn't want to post it for fear of scaring readers away. lol
ReplyDeleteJust out curiousity, would you rate this love scene as raunchy? Did it feel natural or did some parts feel awkward? You can be honest, that way I'll know what kind of adjustments I need to make next time.
It will be a few more updates before she returns to the present. :-)
XD Wow... now that was a interesting update... XD I found the sex posing pictures hilarious... I dunno why... probably 'cause it reminded me of two barbie dolls... O.o But... yeah... Very interesting
ReplyDeleteO.o Where did you get CC skin from? -.- I finally have the decensor mod and like... well, my sim, she looks like a Barbie doll... LOL
I can't wait until the next chapter... O.o I can see why Lyn is in the state she's in now, god Brad is just wow... LOL Poor her...
LOL LadyArora, I'd rather have you laughing at the sex pics than get offended by the content. XD I'd hate to make someone uncomfortable to the point where they stop following my story. I agree, they do look like dolls, I mean I wish the poses looked more natural, but in the end it's the Sims, so that goes with the territory. :-) But thanks for leaving a comment and letting me know that I still have you as a reader!
ReplyDeleteI got the CC skins from ModTheSims. Just do a search on nude skins and there's plenty to choose from. Haha I never even used the nude mod until recently, when I knew a love scene was coming up. Otherwise, I never even used CC or mods.
Haha I love how you said "god Brad is just wow". XD Yeah, definitely poor her. Now do you see why its so hard for her to forget about this man??
Well, first I was O_O then I was :-O and then I was :D. I agree with people. This update was very well written for having nudity and sex in it. I don't think it was raunchy at all. And no, you won't scare me away. I'm going to read this story til the end. I will be sad when the story is done but for now I'm going to enjoy reading every chapter. And yes I still want to slap Brad cuz he hurt Lyn. I feel that he cheated on her, maybe with her sister. I don't know. I will just have to wait and see huh? I can understand Lyn being in love with Brad and finding it hard for her to forget him, but from what I've seen so far, he is no good. That's my opinion.
ReplyDeleteOMG, Traci, I love the rundown of your reaction through smilies. lol I can totally picture your eyes bugging out, then being shocked, then getting the "ahh" moment in the end. Thank you so much for coming back and elaborating, I have to admit I was embarassed to post this update, and all day I've wondering, "Did I go overboard? Should I have played it safe? Did they get weirded out?"
ReplyDeleteSo that fact that you thought it was very well-written for a chapter with nudity and graphic sex in it, it makes me feel so much better. And the fact that you didn't find it raunchy, which a lot of people probably did, reassures me that it was worth writing and posting.
Awww, that means so much to me that you'll be following the story til the end. My goal is to keep it running for as long as possible, as long as I have a plot, so keeping my fingers crossed that I'll continue to come up with the material. I really enjoy writing this story, and I've gotten attached to the characters, so it will be hard for me to say goodbye in the end.
Haha you still want to slap Brad?? I don't blame you. You will find out what happened that made her leave Bridgeport in the next few updates. By the time she returns to the present, you will know everything that led up to the brige scene.
Keep sharing your opinions, I love hearing them! It gives me a new perspective of the story, and possibly ideas for the next updates. :-)
Well, you promised me a full course meal... and girl did you deliver! I skimmed through the other comments, and I see that Brad and Lyn just couldn't keep their hands off each other, could they? You know you've got great characters when they take on a mind of their own :D
ReplyDeleteBut wow, yes, very hot! I'm glad you didn't shy away from anything -- I think this scene really shows the connection the two characters have and certainly explains why Lyn is so attached to Brad. I mean, he manages to be his charming self AND give her a mind-blowing orgasm. Love the way you intertwine Lyn's emotions/thoughts into the scene; again, just shows how sex intensifies and potential complicates their relationship.
Ahh, I'm rambling. I'm just so distracted by Brad's huge tent. Summary: loved it; can't wait for chapter 17!
Hi Countthestars, I've been anxious all day about your feedback, wondering if you liked the love scene or if you found it too raunchy and didn't even finish reading it. So am SO relieved and glad that you enjoyed it!! Haha Im a woman of my word, and I didn't want to disappoint! Especially after the way I ended Ch. 15, some readers wanted felt like they were left hanging. But goodness, this being the first full-blown love scene (describing the sex act) I've ever done, I felt a lot of pressure and I wasn't even sure if I could pull it off with the partial nudity.
ReplyDeleteHaha no, they couldn't keep their hands off each other. I wanted to censor some parts, but they insisted on me being more candid, so I had to follow their wish. Even when I reread it a few times before I posted it, I blushed at some paragraphs, thinking "OMG, I can't believe I wrote that!" I was soooo nervous last night and pretty much all day today. I was afraid people found the chapter too raunchy.
I agree, I didn't realize how strong their connection was until I witnessed everything that they did, and the way they handled it afterwards...I can see why it's so hard for her to forget about him. How can she, when he has this ability to take her into another dimension?? I really wanted to convey everything that she was feeling, thinking, and experiencing at the moment as it was happening. I was trying to do everything I can to make sure it didn't come out raunchy or awkward. Even though this is all happening in the past, and we know they got more serious later on, it feels like it just happened.
Ramble on, I don't mind. I love hearing your thoughts, especially coming from such a talented writer. Bahaha you got distraced by Brad's huge tent. ;-) Don't ask me how I know he's big...that's just how he appeared in my head. Damn, he's a triple threat: professional tongue, big tent and charming. XD
Wow...your love story cherry has definitely been popped. I love the details and I must confess, it got me hot and bothered.
ReplyDeleteSo Brad's packing and an amazing lover? No wonder the girl is heartbroken.
Wow...
ReplyDeleteYeah like that would be my only word?! Pfft. Fooled ya didn't I?
ReplyDeleteLet me reiterate: Wow! That was a dynamic event and the way you described it was beyond words! (hence the previous comment).
So yeah you told me I'd see why it was hard for her to let go and you were right. He wooed the shit out of me and the sex life was incredible. I still can't help but listen to that little voice in the back of my head that says "he's a dog get out while you can."
The love scenes were not raunchy at all, stop worrying. (I know raunch trust me. I think my latest story is straight porn). You wrote this romantically and vividly and it was a great experience had by all. (Especially me...aww the joys of voyeurism). I like that they actually seemed to make love and were more concerned about one another's pleasure than their own. It was straight, dirty sex though I know they wanted to devour one another.
Excellent job showing us how things were and the way her romance worked its way into the idealized version of what she'd always wanted. It helped TREMENDOUSLY to explain why his betrayal and the memories of their time together hits her so hard. He was such a wonderful man and really swept her off her feet. I hope this has taught Lyn that she can project her expectations on to someone like that. No matter how deeply you love a person it doesn't always mean they'll return it in kind. I can't wait to find out what he has to say once they speak at that hospital. I'm extremely curious to find out how the hell he found her ass. He knows her well enough to know what city she up and hopped to? Or did he bribe her brother? GASP! If Adam spilled the beans (cause we learned he has a big mouth) I'm gonna have to do bro some harm. Unless he thought he was doing it for her own good since she needed to confront the demons. I'll believe he was that smart (if it turns out he was the reason she was found).
P.S. *The characters and events in this story are fictional.* <---I know you're Lyn but is Brad real?
P.P.S. Are we exiting her flashbacks now? LOL I'm picturing Brad standing there scratching his head like "You ok? You seemed paralyzed for the last 3 days."
All caught up and anxiously awaiting tomorrow? Or Monday? Yes this is a comment about the fact that this was published on TUESDAY! Man...I'm getting you a calendar for Xmas :P
AAAAAAH, your new chapter was HOT. I can't wait to see what happens next, there is definitely an undeniable change in the relationship. I hope he doesn't lose interest or shack up with some other girl. ALL GIRLS BACK OFF! *Shakes fist*
ReplyDeleteIt was straight dirty sex*
ReplyDelete^^Ooops :)
that word should be "was't" anyways popped in to share the poses with ya. I wasn't sure where you'd prefer them but ya can reach me at daijahvlee@yahoo.com :)
WHEW, Daijah, you don't know how relieved I am that you wrote more. I was like...WHAT? That's it? Did she not like it, did she find it too raunchy?? Then I scroll down and see your other comment, and I was like ahhhhhhh.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you enjoyed that love scene, especially coming from a creator of such hot ones!! Now do you see why she's so crazy about this guy and she can't forget about him, no matter how much he screwed her over?? But I agree, there's something about him that seems unpredictable, and I'm worried for her.
WHEW, so it wasn't raunchy at all. I'm so glad to hear that!! YES vivid and romantic is what I wanted to portray even though there were some parts that were graphic, along with the nudity. ANd I'm also glad that they seemed to make love even though it was their first time together, I really wanted their connection to show, as well as their intense sexual chemistry. YOu're not the only voyeur around here. lol XD
And I'm so glad that you are able to see why I spent so much time with her flashbacks even though I know you're curious about how she's going to react to him when she returns to the present. I want you to know everything that happened by the time she gets on that cab, and you'll go "Ohhhhhhh". So it will take a few more updates before she returns to the present.
Actually she never told Adam where she is. So he could'nt have told Brad. You will find out how he ended up there as well. :-) I agree, despite how much of her heart and soul she put in her relationship with him, there's no guarantee that he will return it the same way. But she fell head over heels. But you know what they say, it's better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all. No matter how much you get screwed over.
Brad is fictional but he represents a lot of the guys that I used to date. She's be in Bridgeport for a few more chapters then she'll return to the present. Bahahha at "you seemed paralyzed for 3 days." XD
I will try to get Ch. 17 posted before midnight tonight. But I won't say no to a calendar. lol
PS: Thanks for the correction, I kind of knew that's what you meant but wasn't sure. And thanks so much for the poses! You're the best. :-)
Xfairytale, WHEW I'm so glad you thought that chapter was HOT! I thought I weirded you out for a second. lol I agree, ALL GIRLS NEED TO BACK OFF! XD
ReplyDeleteLOL Lauren, yes my love story cherry has been popped. lol It's weird because after I wrote that, I felt like I can write anything. XD I definitely don't have the jitters anymore.
ReplyDeleteWOW, that got you hot and bothered?? NICE, that means I did my job! XD
Bahaha now do you see why this girl is so hung up over him?? I mean how do you forget mind-blowing orgasms just like that?? :-)
Hey, it's Ali! I FINALLY got to catch up, and all I can say is...
ReplyDeleteWOW. It gets better and better with every episode! This one was soooo hot, it makes me want to jump my boyfriend when he gets home. ;) Haha, TMI, I know. But it's true.
I love this series! I feel bad for Lyn though, because obviously Brad hurt her very badly. :(
Hi Ali!! Welcome to my blog, I'm so happy to see you stop by and leave a comment! YAY you're all caught up :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I really try to make each update as good or better than the last, so it means a lot to me to heart. I was actually worried about what you might think about the graphic sex I thought I'd scare you away. But WOW it made you want to jump your boyfriend when he gets home?? WOOOT!!! YOU GO GIRL!! I've done my job! XD
And there's no such thing as TMI with me, speak your mind, I won't judge. Based on the language and content of my story, you can tell I can get a little candid. So feel free to share what's on your anytime. :-)
YAY so glad you're loving this series!! I hope you continue to follow it since I put Real World on hold. Awww, your concern for Lyn is very touching. You will get to see what happened though to make her leave Bridgeport.
Have a great weekend and I hope classes are going well!
HOT DAMN! *in my brad voice*
ReplyDeleteThat was hot! You got some serious skill with the erotic writing! I'm defiantly impressed!
The romance and intamacy between them is just so damn...! I loved how they were teasing each other! It was so cute!
I agree with Lyn I do see hwy he is so popular with the ladies!
LOL Bri, you are cracking me up!! I can't believe you actually remember what Brad said. XD I'm glad you enjoyed it, as I was a wreck when I first posted it, being my first full love scene, feared that it would be too raunchy. To my relief, the readers enjoyed it. lol
ReplyDeleteWow, erotic writing?? I never thought of it that way, but it's my favorite part of writing romance. In fact, it's my favorite part of reading a romance novel. I practically claw at pages to get to the hot love scenes. XD Everything is just so vivid in my head, and I try to describe everything that my senses experience. Thank you so much!!
YES, Lyn and Brad definitely have sizzling chemistry. He's just insatiable with her and the inner slut in her comes out. I don't blame them one bit for having such a steamy first time.
Haha now you see why the ladies hound him. Not only does he have a big tent, he knows how to use it. lol
THAT...WAS...INTENSE!!!!!
ReplyDeleteLOL Qui!!
ReplyDeleteI'll take that as a compliment. XD
OMG, HOOOOOT!!!!! *fans self* That was great, YUM!!! Oooo, another *** rating. I'm going to save the rest for later, when I calm down. Cos right all I want to do is jump Brad.
ReplyDeleteLOL Leah, I loooooove your comment!! XD Anytime I get a "fans self", that means I did my job. Woot!! Haha it's so cute how you're exciting about another *** rating and you're all saving it for later. ;-)
ReplyDeleteHahaha you want to jump Brad?? Alright, round the girls, me, you, Daijah and Qui are about to do some serious man-rape. XD